Ciao, amici! You know how much I love to host authors (especially good friends). Well, we kicked off a string of wonderful guests yesterday, and today, we’re still going strong.
I’d like to welcome Joan Hall back to the blog. I’m sure many of you recognize her from her guest posts here as well as from Story Empire, where we’re both contributors. Joan and I “met” online years ago in a writing group and formed a fast friendship that’s only grown stronger over the years. We bonded over story (she writes romantic suspense with a heavy focus on legends and lore, so you know that spoke to me) as well as over many shared similarities. We frequently joke that we share a brain (and I SO pity her for that). We’ve worked together on many projects, and I’m honored to have had a sneak peek at Menagerie before she released it. (And I can’t say enough good things about it—see my review below.) Now, I’m delighted to share it with you. Please help me welcome Joan today as she talks about her latest release.
Friends
Staci, thanks for hosting me today. I’m excited to tell you and your readers about my newest release, Menagerie. It’s a mixed-genre compilation of thirteen short stories.
“Friends” is romantic suspense, which is one of my favorite genres to write. Today, I’d like to share how the story came about.
Ideas come in all sorts of ways. Several years ago, WordPress offered a daily word prompt where bloggers could write a story and share the link on a common site. One Saturday morning, I decided to take part. The word that day was “illusion.”
The original blog post was around five hundred words. It was my first time to write anything in first person, but that’s where the muse took me. I later added four additional scenes using WP word prompts.
I’m a panster, so I had no idea where I was going with the story, but the basic concept was two former law enforcement partners meet again after two years. The female partner was out to dinner with a group of coworkers when she has the distinct feeling she’s being watched. She’s right. It’s no illusion. Her former partner shows up in the small town where she now lives.
Eventually, I put the story aside, but I always wanted to finish it. Last year, I dusted off those old scenes, changed them from first person to third person, and ended up writing a 10K word story. There was one problem. I hated it.
When I began editing the first draft, I ended up doing a complete rewrite. I eliminated several characters, changed a few more, and added at least one. Painful as it was, I killed a few darlings, including one flashback scene. I had a few lines that I wanted to use elsewhere, but there really wasn’t a place for them. My first writing instructor advised me to never throw away a piece of writing. I have those scenes saved and it’s possible I’ll use them one day in a future story.
After completing the rewrite and edits, “Friends” became one of my favorites in this collection.
Excerpt:
Thomas slid a thick folder across the desk.
A surge of excitement swept over Cassie. Months had passed since she’d been involved in a “real” investigation. Such was life in Angel Falls.
“This case has been hanging over our heads for a long time. The state sent someone to assist. You’ll be working with him. Matter of fact, he mentioned you. Said he was familiar with your reputation with the Woodville Police.”
“What’s his name?”
“Ah, he’s here. Lieutenant, I believe you know Detective Van Zandt.”
Cassie turned. A tall man with dark brown hair stood at the door.
“Hello, Cassie. It’s been a while.”
Two years, one month, and thirteen days. But who’s counting?
“Nick.”
“Looks like we’re working together again.”
Blurb:
King’s. The Tower of London. Glass. What do these have in common?
Each is a famous menagerie.
While this Menagerie doesn’t focus on exotic animals, it does contain a collection of stories that explore various trials people face and how their reactions shape their worlds.
Survivors of a haunted bridge. Women who wait while their husbands fight a war. Former partners reuniting to solve a cold-case murder.
These are just three of the thirteen stories in this compendium, encompassing past and present, natural and supernatural, legend and reality. The genres and timelines are varied, but there’s a little something for everyone who enjoys reading about simpler times and small-town life.
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My Review:
How to Pick a Favorite When They’re All So Good?
I like short story collections because I can read an entire tale in one sitting even when I don’t have a lot of time. In the case of Menagerie, I made the time to read more than one at once. In fact, I read the entire collection in one sitting.
Hall has the skill to suck me in from her opening words and hold my attention throughout. She taps into her characters’ emotions so that I feel them, and I experience their worlds as though I was there. Menagerie offers thirteen stories that explore war, death, love, reunion, mystery, and lore. It’s impossible to say which was my favorite, as there is something in each that speaks to my soul, but I do want to call out a few stories for various reasons.
- Summerwood and Stony Creek, both of which speak to my desire for a proper work/life balance.
- Lone Wolf for its hopeful message.
- Mystery Woman and Storm Rider for the goose bumps.
- The Homecoming because the topic is dear to my heart and SO important.
I enjoyed this entire collection and devoured every word. There are various genres represented, so there’s something for everyone. But as for this reader? I loved them all. I highly recommend Menagerie without reservation.
I’m so glad Joan gave me her “Friends” post, because she is a dear friend. And I’m so glad she came to the site today to talk a little bit about this story and her new release. I hope you’ll join me in sharing Joan’s announcement and in offering her congratulations by leaving a comment below. Before you leave, I invite you to click on some of the links, most especially the purchase link for Menagerie.
Grazie!
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I always enjoy hearing origins of stories, Joan. And you’re right about never throwing away writing. I’ve kept folders I never thought I’d use again – but I was wrong. Thanks for hosting, Staci!
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I have tons of folders with ideas and unused scenes. Just this past week, I came across some unused scenes from my first novella. Thanks for stopping by, Teri.
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I keep everything, too. And I’m so glad Joan kept everything that led to this story. Thanks, Teri.
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I read the story “Friends” yesterday and enjoyed it. I think I’ll finish the book today and what a treat it’s been. It was fun learning a little about the behind-the-scenes evolution of the story. Wonderful review, Staci, and huge congrats to Joan.
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I’m glad you enjoyed Friends, Diana. The ideas for each of the stories came in various ways. It’s fun to tell about them.
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I’m at around 85% and dying to find time to finish it today. 🙂
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It is a treat to read a story or two at a time. Thanks, Diana.
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I love the excerpt and the story behind the book, especially. Thank you for sharing, Staci! Wishing you much success, Joan!
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Thank you so much, Tessa.
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I’m a fan of learning the stories behind the stories, too. Thanks, Tessa.
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Can’t wait to get to this!
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Thanks, Judi!
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I’m sure you’ll love it, Judi. Thanks.
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Ooh, great teaser! Congrats on the awesome review, Joan. I’m looking forward to reading this one.
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Thank you, Jacquie. I had a lot of fun writing this collection.
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I’m sure you’ll enjoy it, Jacquie. Thanks.
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I loved this story and rooted for them to get past their blocks to find the relationship they both wanted. And all while solving a cold case. Great writing, Joan! Congrats on this new release. I wish you all the best. Thank you for hosting, Staci.
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That’s one thing that didn’t change from my original draft – that Cassie and Nick found their way to one another. The part about the cat was almost an afterthought, but I liked the way it turned out. Of course, you know how I love kitties! Thanks, Jan.
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I’m pro-pet, too. And I’m glad you kept the HEA, Joan.
Thanks, Jan.
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I glad you found your way with this story, Joan 🙂 it was a good one. I try to hang on so some of my favorite parts I have to remove from story. But I’m not always good about that.
Thanks for hosting, Staci!
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I keep thinking about that deleted scene and what to do with it. And I think I just got an idea. More to come on that. Thanks, Denise.
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I learned my lesson long ago and keep all my deleted parts now. You never know what you can do with them later.
Thanks, Denise.
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I love reading the backstory at each tour stop, Joan. Your experiences and interests enrich the story and make it all the more special. I loved your collection and will get my review up in the next day or two. Congratulations! Thank you, Staci, for featuring Joan today and sharing your great review. 🎉🎊🎉
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Thank you so much, Gwen. I’m happy you enjoyed the stories. I sure had fun writing them.
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Thanks for sharing your thoughts here, Gwen.
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That’s interesting how one prompt word elicited a story named Friends! Thanks for sharing the experience, Joan. Writing and re-writing to polish may be time-consuming but rewarding. Congratulations. Thanks for sharing a wonderful post Staci.
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That’s so true, Balroop. Editing does take time, but worth it (and necessary).
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Agreed, Balroop. Thanks for visiting.
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Congratulations Joan and Staci for the introduction.
Love the layers and building of how they come together !
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Thank you so much, Cindy.
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Thanks, Cindy!
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What a lovely backstory on your friendship with Joan, especially that it started online. I enjoyed it as much as the book review!
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Thanks Jacqui. We go back a few years. Of all the people in that group, I felt closer to Staci than anyone. Now that she’s living back in Arkansas, I’m determined that we’ll one day meet in person.
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Aww. Thanks, Jacqui.
And I hope so, too, Joan!
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Staci, thank you for hosting me today and for your wonderful review of Menagerie. Who would have thought all those years ago from that online group, we’d still be sharing stories (and brains)?
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I knew the second I “met” you we’d always be friends. So glad to help you promote Friends (and your whole collection).
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And thanks for the kind words on your site. They warmed my heart. (Though you gave me too much credit in your own career.)
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I meant them. I have learned so much about the craft of writing from you. ❤
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I enjoyed reading the story behind “Friends.” I’ve always loved writing prompts and it certainly sounds like this one worked well for Joan. Thanks for hosting today, Staci!
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Jill, I think sometimes writing prompts are just what we need to get us on track when were “stuck.” I always wanted to further develop this story. Including it in Menagerie was the perfect place to do that.
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I found those prompts to be very beneficial. I wish they still did them.
Thanks, Jill.
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This looks like a terrific read!
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Thank you, Kymber!
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I can’t say enough good things. Thanks, Kymber.
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A terrific review, Staci. Can’t wait to get to these. Congratulations, Joan.
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Thanks, John. I hope you’ll enjoy the stories.
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I’m sure I will cause you wrote them
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Time is always my greatest enemy. I’m sure you’ll enjoy them when you get to them, John. Thanks for visiting.
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I already have Menagerie awaiting me on my Kindle, and expect to be digging into the stories VERY soon! Can’t wait, and today’s excerpt has made me that much more eager to get to it! Great post, Ladies, and Joan, here’s to huge success with this one! It feels to me like you’ve got a real winner here! 😀 ❤
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Thank you, Marcia. I can’t tell you how long I’ve wanted to publish this collection (probably because i can’t recall when I first got the idea of writing thirteen stories). I had fun writing them and I hope you enjoy reading.
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I’m absolutely sure I’ll love the stories, Joan. Now to accomplish one of my big goals for 2023: getting caught up on reviews! I had fallen behind BEFORE I got sick, and it only got worse last year. But! I’m aiming HIGH this year. We’ll see how I do. fingers crossed 😀
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Fingers crossed for you, Marcia!
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Thanks, Staci! I’ll take all the help I can get! 😀 😀 😀
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I love these stories behind the scenes. I could feel the underlying tension in that excerpt, and congratulations on that great review.
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Thanks, Craig. That scene is one that I didn’t change a lot in. I’ve always maintained that ideas come in all sorts of places, and this collection certainly proves that.
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I enjoy that, too, Craig. Thanks for visiting.
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I enjoyed reading the backstory of how “Friends” came to be. I never throw away culled bits of writing either (unless they’re just cringe-worthy and deserved to die). All the best for your tour!
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Liz, I have thrown away a few of those as well. I have bits and pieces here and there. Recently came across some deleted scenes in one of my first publications that I’d totally forgotten about.
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It’s always fun to find writing we’ve forgotten about. 🙂
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I do have some of those cringe-worthy passages. Might be fun to revisit those…
Thanks, Liz.
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You’re welcome, Staci.
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It’s hard to believe “Friends” started out as a story you didn’t like, Joan. I’m glad you kept at it; it’s wonderful now. I’m working my way through the collection and enjoying it!
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Thank you, Priscilla. You should have seen that first draft! I’m not sure where my mind was when I wrote it. 🙂 I’m glad you’re enjoying the stories.
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Agreed, Priscilla. Thanks!
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I’m glad you hung onto those initial scenes from the WP prompt and built on them, Joan. And I don’t know what the first draft of Friends was like, but I loved the final version. It’s a great story in a great collection of stories. I’m wishing you all the best with this release.
Many thanks to Staci for hosting today!
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Mae, suffice to say it was all over the place. It was also over 10K words, so I knew I needed to cut some scenes. It was one of the first drafts finished, but the last story to edit. I’m glad you enjoyed the final version.
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Funny how things evolve, isn’t it? Thanks, Mae.
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I have cleared some space this weekend to read these stories!
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Thank you! I hope you enjoy them.
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Popular opinion says that I will, Joan…
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Nothing better than a long period of time reserved for reading! Enjoy!
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Congratulations, Joan, on your new book and this fabulous review. I have Menagerie waiting on my ereader for me and am excited to read it.
Staci, thanks for sharing!
Hugs 💕🙂
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Thank you, Harmony!
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I’m sure you’ll enjoy it, Harmony. Thanks.
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This is a perfect example of how one idea can morph into a great story. I love reading about how a story evolves. Another wonderful stop on the blog tour.
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Ideas are all around us, Darlene and the ideas for these stories came from all sorts of places (and memories). Thanks for stopping by today.
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I can see that!
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It is a perfect example.
Thanks, Darlene.
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