Ciao, amici! How was your week? If you read my Tuesday post, you know I had a release—one I wasn’t expecting and had to hurry to prepare for (The Scout). But that actually wasn’t my biggest accomplishment in the last seven days.
That honor goes to Astral Conspiracy Series Book Two. (I’ll be revealing the title and cover in a month or two, so stay tuned for that.) I wrapped up the final edits on ACS2 yesterday afternoon. (Pop the bubbly!) It’s now in pre-production, getting formatted and having blurbs written and marketing materials prepared. Yesterday was a huge weight off my shoulders.
You’d think, as an editor, I’d find revisions easy. This final one was. My editor suggested few corrections. Mostly word echoes and clunky constructions (and one sentence that neither of us could even figure out what I meant—oops!). But it was that second revision that nearly drove me to drink. And not celebratory champagne, but the hard stuff to drown my sorrows. Which brings me to today’s quote by an unknown author.
That second draft will not kill you.
It may kill some of your characters.
(Odds of this happening go up exponentially
if you write murder mysteries.)
But it will absolutely, positively, pinky swear
not kill you.
I’ll admit, there were times I thought that draft would do me in. I may have shed a frustrated tear at three in the morning. I know I ate more chocolate than I should have. (Too bad I didn’t have chocolate covered coffee beans—on second thought, maybe that’s a good thing.) And I definitely will NEVER again write out of sequence then rearrange scenes later. (You people who do that are insane. And I am in awe of your ability to do it.)
That second revision did not kill me. My final edit was a breeze, and it’s over. Now, happily, I’m well into Astral Conspiracy Series 3. And boy, do I have surprises in store for my readers!
I hope you had an easy week. If you want to share your writing, revising, polishing stories with us, we’d love to hear them.
And now, this week’s writing links:
Posts by me, about my work, or at sites I contribute to:
Me
- Aliens Are Coming (The Gate guest post) | Writing Musing
- A Surprise Release
- Book Review: The Scout | Harmony Kent
Story Empire
- When Are You Most Creative? | Mae Clair
- A Word About Research | Me
- Friday Book Cover: Old Bones by Preston and Child | Mae Clair
Posts by others in the industry:
- Bestseller Case Study | Goodreads
- Why You Need to Market Your Book Before Publishing | Ari Meghlen
- Relevance of Facebook Infographic | Nicholas C. Rossis
- 10 Writing Tips | Shelley Wilson
- The Breakout Novel | Kristen Lamb
- Story Breadcrumbs | Fiction University
- Tips for Writing Single Fathers | Legends of Windemere
- Examples of Ways to Describe Weather | Word Dreams
- Why Book Blurbs are Crucial to Book Success | Kobo Writing Life
- Securing Reviews | Jane Friedman
- Magic Systems and World-Building | Writers Helping Writers
- Free Writing | Standout Books
- Story Stakes | The Kill Zone
- Short Story Idea Generation | Writer’s Relief
To make you smile:
- Cats Being Weird | Smorgasbord
- Laughter Lines | Smorgasbord
- Can’t Brain Today; Have the Dumb | Bluebird of Bitterness
- Friday Fun | The Storyreading Ape
- Labels | Bluebird of Bitterness
- Let’s Hear It for the Dogs | Smorgasbord
- Bird Puns | Bluebird of Bitterness
- Lucy and Twiggy Outside | John W. Howell
And when you’re done with these links, don’t forget to check out the sidebar, where you’ll find more links to some of my favorite sites.
Have a great weekend! Arrivederci!
Love the quote! Especially love the addendum about murder mysteries snicker. Yep, I can relate. I’ve killed off a few characters in later drafts. But they deserved it. Really! I like the easy revisions … until I send them to beta readers or my critique group and find out the “easy” wasn’t exactly correct 😀
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I’ve been killing a lot of characters lately, some of whom deserve it, others… well, their sacrifices were necessary.
I’ll never have a revision as difficult as this last one. Never again. I like easy (who doesn’t?) so I’m sticking with working in my comfort zone.
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Terrific post Staci.
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Thank you, Rozina!
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Reblogged this on Kim's Musings.
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Much appreciated!
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Ha! Terrific quote, Staci. It really is hard to kill-off or even remove a character! Horsefeathers, I get upset enough just having to rename one.
Have a great new week. Hugs!
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As I write darker and darker genres, I’m learning to get less and less attached. But early in my career I used to cry at character deaths. (Okay, I admit it. Sometimes I still do.)
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Congratulations on your new release Staci, and thank you for your writing links.
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Thank you, Rob!
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Big cheers to you, Staci! Enjoy the celebrations to the fullest. 🙂
Many thanks for another fabulous share, as well. Cheers!
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Thanks, Natalie!
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Good to know I won’t be killed by my editing… Phew! Love that quote by the way. 😀
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Thanks, Kevin.
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Reblogged this on All About Writing and more.
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Much appreciated. 🙂
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U are welcome
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Reblogged this on Where Genres Collide Traci Kenworth YA Author & Book Blogger.
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Many thanks.
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You’re welcome, Staci!
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Congratulations on your huge efforts Staci. You’re an inspiration!
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Thanks, Jess.
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Oh, I love that “second draft” quote. It reminds me of the Twitter writer profiles that say they kill people for a living.
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Those always bring a smile to my face. 😀
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I need to move anywhere that sells chocolate coated coffee beans! Eeek, run … save yourselves! It’s a marvelous feeling when the muse kicks into hyperdrive! Congratulations, Staci! This is an awesome accomplishment.
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My son works part time at a chocolate shop, so I can get them anytime I ask. Which I never do, because my hips don’t need the extra strain. But when I see them in the store, I think it’s destiny and buy a bag. I sure could have used them during that last revision!
Thanks, Soooz.
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Congrats on beating those edits into submission! Sounds as though you’re on a writing roll- oh, what a feeling 🙂
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It wasn’t pretty, Jacquie. But I love the end result. Thanks. 🙂
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Glad you survived your edits! They can be a challenge sometimes. Sounds like yours were more joy than usual:) I’m sitting down to work on rewrites today, but I got lucky. My critique partner let me off easy this time. Not always the case:) I read your short story THE SCOUT last night and loved it! Makes me ready to start the next book in the series. Good to hear it’s in pre-production now. (I shared this on my author Facebook page. I know friends who can relate to it).
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The revisions were a nightmare; the edits a breeze. I don’t want to go through that again, so I’m back to writing chronologically and not deviating.
Thanks for the kind words about The Scout and for sharing on FB. I finished my ARC of your latest Jazzi mystery, and it’s my favorite so far. (Still swooning over Ansel.)
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Something for the weekend, Sir? Of course: some links!
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Congrats on your sucesses! I’m in the middle of fixing my confused story. Doing the middle last has been a challenge. I can’t wait to read your upcoming releases:) Have a wonderful weekend.
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Those confusing middles are the worst. Wishing you luck, Denise.
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Thanks so much for sharing.
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Congratulations on finishing your edits!
I don’t have the knack for writing out of sequence. I’ve known several writers who swear by it, but I’d make a hot mess of it.
You are really on a roll with your Astral Conspiracy series. I can’t wait for the next release. The Scout is a nice treat to hold everyone over until book 2. 🙂
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Thanks, Mae.
I’m with you—I know writers who work this way and love it, but I can’t do it. Especially with so many POVs to juggle. Book three is going smoothly, and book two has been put to bed. I can’t wait for the release in a few months.
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I especially like your “Posts by others in the industry”. I keep that around over the weekend for breaks. Nice, Staci.
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That’s how this Friday roundup started. But then I added a few other categories. (Makes it easier for me to keep everything straight.) I’m glad you find it useful, Jacqui.
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Staci’s release news and writing links of the week
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Much appreciated.
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Ah, editing… How do I love you? Let me count the ways. Erm… none? 😀
Huge congrats on the release!!!
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Right? LOL
Thanks, Nicholas.
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Anyone who thinks writing a book is easy has obviously not done it. It’s a lot of hard work, blood, sweat, and tears. I love the quote and happy you pushed through the edits. I agree with you about writing out of sequence. My mind doesn’t work that way. Congrats on finishing and on the new release this week!
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I don’t know how people do it. I need that logical progression for transitions and details and breadcrumbs. It took me so much longer to properly fix the flow and plant the clues than if I had just taken the time to work out my problems as I came to them.
Thanks, Jan.
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I have a problem finishing. I start and then something else pops in my already crammed full to exploding head. So I start another project. If I buckle down, I could have quite a few novels ready to publish. LOL
As for writing in sequence, I stray. I don’t need to write in any particular order. My brain just works that way.
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Your brain is an enigma, Michele. 🤪
And yes, please, pick a project and see it through. It’s been too long since you published.
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Yes, I need to pick one and finish. A little nagging will go a long way.
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You know I’m good at nagging…
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It’s cool that you’re still excited about the books. I go through a love/hate relationship with all of mine.
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I always hate mine around the 25% and 75% points. And I often consider them trash-worthy at 95%. But (once I figure out the opening) I always love the beginning, the midpoint, and the end. And because I write series, loving the end of one book makes it easier to love the beginning of the next.
You’d think the three dark points would be where I was most engaged, but those are usually the hardest parts for me to write.
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I’m in awe of your production level, Staci! Love how neither of you could figure out what the sentence meant. I put notes in my phone about things to add to the story, and I’ve come across several that left me puzzled as to what I meant.
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The funniest part? Adding one three-letter word made the sentence crystalize. Without it, though, it was rubbish. And nonsensical. I’m glad I finally figured it out. I usually have a few cut and paste errors and a couple missing sentence endings, too. (Which is proof even an editor needs an editor.)
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I think you are right about not being killed bu the second draft. It just feels like it. Fun post, Staci and thank you for the link. Big puppy hug for you. (Ooop sorry about the black outfit.)
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Not a problem. My dogs already have their fur all over me. What’s a few more in exchange for puppy hugs? Give them belly rubs from me. 🙂
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I will.
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Gosh, what a week, Staci. Well done on your achievements and thanks for the links.
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Thank you! It feels good to check a couple things off my list. (Even if I forgot one of them was on there.)
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Yes, I’m insane! LOL. Love the quote and I know what you mean about second drafts being the death of you. Been there, done that, bought the t-shirt. Congrats on the new release and finishing the second Astral book.
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I think the insanity is directly related to the scene-rearranging, Joan. LOL
Thanks. I’m already 20K+ words into book three and it’s a much smoother process so far.
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Thanks for such an inspiring post, Staci… The beta read report on my WIP is back and the final edit has begun, so I will soon be reaching for a similar bottle!
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And I’ll be toasting with you. Congratulations!
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Staci, congratulations!! 😀😀 A great quote and should give writers courage! Hope you have a relaxing weekend! 🌸
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I hope it does, Annika. When I saw it, I immediately related to it.
Relaxation isn’t on my weekend agenda, but I hope it’s on yours. ☀️
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Thanks for sharing the funnies Staci.. have a great weekend.. hugs
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Glad to spread some smiles. 🤗
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Staci Troilo with news of her new releases and also with links from her own blog and from around the community… plenty for writers and those seeking entertainment…
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Thanks so much for sharing, Sally.
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Pleasure Staci..hugsx
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Much appreciated, Harmony.
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Great quote, Staci, and one I can definitely relate to, lol. Well done on finishing … now you deserve a celebratory drink! Have a fantastic weekend 🙂
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This last revision was the hardest I’ve ever done. I think the edit was the easiest, though, so I suppose it was worth it. Still… whew! 🤪
I do think I might end the day with a cocktail, though. It’s been a long week. 🍸
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